Lefelee - I'm perpexled. You do not have to be assessed on assistant referee matches as a 6-5 referee, and I have never seen this type of assessment for a 6-5. But then again, you saying you're going 6-5, which suggests you are based in England. Are you based in England? Or have I got very confused!
But yes, this assessment is very poor indeed. Poorly written, and does essentially rip into you. This assessment would be overlooked, due to this, and due to the fact it offers no constructive advice whatsoever.
A very poor assessor.