Need to write a misconduct report for an SFP red in a friendly. What's best?
1. Short and sweet
In the 6th minute of the game xx tackled an opponent in a dangerous manner, using excessive force, so I dismissed him for serious foul play. I was 10 yards from the incident and had a clear and unobstructed view.
2. A bit more detail
In the 6th minute of the game xx tackled an opponent in a dangerous manner by lunging in from a distance of 2 to 3 yards, off the ground and without control, making direct contact with his opponent's ankle. I judged this to be a use of excessive force and I dismissed xxx for serious foul play. I was 10 yards from the incident and had a clear and unobstructed view.
3. War and peace
Only joking!
Thoughts? To be fair I can't see this being appealed, but you never know.
1. Short and sweet
In the 6th minute of the game xx tackled an opponent in a dangerous manner, using excessive force, so I dismissed him for serious foul play. I was 10 yards from the incident and had a clear and unobstructed view.
2. A bit more detail
In the 6th minute of the game xx tackled an opponent in a dangerous manner by lunging in from a distance of 2 to 3 yards, off the ground and without control, making direct contact with his opponent's ankle. I judged this to be a use of excessive force and I dismissed xxx for serious foul play. I was 10 yards from the incident and had a clear and unobstructed view.
3. War and peace
Only joking!
Thoughts? To be fair I can't see this being appealed, but you never know.